All in all, nice
The game its actually very nice. Your drawings are amazing and the animation is very smooth! Its just incredible. Now, with the history i think you made a good job showing the unbelievable and the weirdness of it, without getting to the absurd I mean, there are fairies and chain-eating dolls. The mood and the music of the game gives all... Um... Sort of sense? Though it would fit better some, crazy, paranormal sense. The whole idea its interesting and all the presentation (Menu, name of the game) it really attracts you to play the game. The puzzles and the search part were fine, but i admit i used the walktrough in like... the whole thing... Ag, real life or games i cant find a thing even if its in front of my face. asdasdasd
Ok... Now the weak points... The characters arent developed enough i think. Try thinking a couple of adjetives that you think it would fit to Leon, or Sara, and when you are doing the dialogues, make them answer according to the words you choose. Tiny advice, just what i do. Also, i think that something is mising in the story, in how you tell it, though i couldnt say what it is.
Also, the bugs. Multiple texts or texts in cutscenes is something that you may want to fix. If you did all the battle reaction stuff, i think you could fix that. Second, and probably the most important problem, its the battle itself. The idea its good, but it really needs something that tells you that you have to press the green circle to attack with the doll, and the most annoying bug, its when you have to click when the dot is on a green area, because the dot magically disapear after a while. The two times i tried to beat the game from the start i got stuck because of that. Sadly, i couldnt see how the thing ended.
Well, good luck!